Trapped in the Eyes of Love

Fri, 10/26/2012 - 01:24 -- jordyeb

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89103
United States
36° 6' 37.4868" N, 115° 12' 24.1236" W

Love is watching
someone dying,
Their bodies
slowly falling.

Your heart
an empty room,
Walls of red
dark like a tomb.

Your soul
cold like an empty bed,
Like the black hole
you trapped me in.

Your hands
uninviting,
Like i'm quarantined
even when we're not fighting.

Your eyes
piercing,
Like a thousand knives
going into my spine.

My brain,
ignores the pain.

But my once whole heart,
is falling apart.

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