Trees

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Wonder how their leaves flow each times the wind blows
wonder how their bark is as strong as a rock
wonder how their shade can keep the beaming sun away
wonder how they feel when theyir trunk is being pierced by an ax made of steel
wonder how they shriek when their trunk is torn piece by piece
wonder how they feel when they're made into paper, tables, or a writing tool
wonder how they feel relaxed as a protestor stops the man with the ax
wonder how they feel loved as many people give them hugs
Trees

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Bazzaro127

I love it, there were a couple word errors though, nothing big but just little small stuff like "ax, times, theyir" they could be fixed to "Axe, time, their' I loved the poem otherwise ;) i thought it was magnificant:) great job!!! Keep up the amazing work

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