Trudges On

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32708
United States
28° 40' 55.3332" N, 81° 15' 46.4256" W

Dundund prudundun
Droplets drumming dead the door;
Tettle-little lylyettle
Celestial tears tickling ivory eaves.

Tapping toes on a hardwood floor.

Ceiling soaked of sobbing sky,
Child choked as heaven's eye.
Sole soul soaked by sweat
And tears.
Shattered shelter swimming
In fears.

Child trips, yet trudges on.

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