truth #6

do you feel it do you feel it

the rushing of hate the rushing of fate

fated fates kiss a fated blade upon fated hates

the feeling of hate the feeling of fate 

do we really want another age of rage

do we really want another age of fated wages 

Comments

thedoublamatrix

clever.

Yetty Daniels Tolu

This is amazing!! I just got to see this and I'm so impressed big time

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