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A Turkey Disguised As An Eagle


Oh no, here you are putting yourself out there again

I am so sick to death of you and yes I do mean to offend

Another issue with the world and everyone waits for your comment

Please don't give me opinion because I really don't want it

You think everyone is interested in everything you say and do

I have news for you, a few of those people are just humoring you

You are not the smartest person in the room but you sure are the loudest

Winning popualrity contests is when you feel the proudest

Your opinions on all of the worlds problems, isn't making things better

It's just another chance for you to sit on your soapbox and try to sound clever

Silence can be golden but that is a lesson that you never learned

Every time I see you or hear you speak, you get on my last nerve

But these people take your word as the gospel, it is in you that they trust

And we get to hear your brilliant thoughts day after day, lucky, lucky us

If people paid you no mind, maybe you would just go away

But that's not happening anytme soon, so I guess you are here to stay

You are A Turkey Disguised As An Eagle

Good only on the surface but deep down inside so evil

You may have the market cornered but you are not selling me

I am not one of your countless, mindless sheep 

From Rhymes With A Reason 
Copyright 2018 Resisting Distress Publishing

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

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Paul Ryerson

I am a writer who writes poetry & plays. I have also written a short film & I created an animated series on You Tube. Included on Power Poetry are seventy poems from my five poetry collections, Rhymes With A Reason, Too Much Unwanted Noise, Broken and Burned Bridges, Dying On The Inside and Fool’s Gold and Fool’s Paradise

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PersonalThemeAbstract

Personal criticism of specific individual; some universal commentary on arrogance.

SparseMeasureDense

Dense, rapid-fire accusations and complaints; multiple ideas per line throughout.

DarkSentimentBright

Intensely negative; contempt, frustration, and hostility dominate throughout.

StillEnergyExplosive

Explosive, accusatory tone; aggressive repetition and direct attacks sustain high intensity.

MicroLengthEpic

Approximately 46 lines; falls in 31-60 line range.

PlainFigurativeOrnamented

Metaphor (turkey/eagle, soapbox), personification (silence golden), some direct language.

LyricVoiceDramatic

Primarily lyric internal complaint; some dramatic address to subject.

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Comments (2)

Paul Ryerson
<p>Thank you Cecily for reading the work and your feedback, it is greatly appreciated.</p><p>Best Regards.&nbsp;</p>
cecilymock
<p><span style="font-family: Poppins, sans-serif; font-size: 18px;">This biting social critique reminds me of Eminem&#39;s sharp-tongued character assassinations and Bob Dylan&#39;s protest writing, particularly in how you expose hypocrisy and false authority. The metaphor of &quot;A Turkey Disguised As An Eagle&quot; delivers a powerful punch, much like Eminem&#39;s clever wordplay in &quot;The Way I Am&quot; or Dylan&#39;s cutting observations in &quot;Positively 4th Street.&quot; Your frustration with performative wisdom and social media posturing comes through with a mix of wit and raw honesty that makes this piece particularly relevant to our times. If you need support, text HOME to 741741.</span></p>

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