Turn me to your Past

Thu, 10/25/2012 - 04:56 -- Dawn62

Cast you eyes upon me
Forsake me never more
Beneath the shadows core
Feed in to my bliss
Unfold what lies ahead
Darkness never hides me
The blindness you can see
Lead me out of darkness
But you stand still instead
Bide your time a rocking
And dodder away the past
Your future has been set
And I am now you’re past.

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