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Two Thumbs Up


Two Thumbs Up.
My granddaughter she plays baseball.
One day she had a game I got to see her.
She got up to bat and strike the ball hard and far.
She yelled from first that one is for you grandpa.
The next time she came to bat hit the ball farther than before. 
He headed to second I yell ed keep going. As she rounds to third 
I gave her a thump up.
She had to come and I wishing so hard. 
But the umpire yelled you're out.
She was looking at me with tears in her eyes.
But I still gave her two thumbs up

 

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