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Tying Ties


I thought I double-knotted the ties

But they frayed on their own
And I stood and watched
Each string fall away from the knot
One by one.
 
Standing between two cliffs,
I told myself 
not to look down into the abyss.
Because it'll just make you nervous.
 
"It won't break."
I kept telling myself.
"It's one of the strongest I've tied."
And I trusted the ties so much.
With my own life at times.
 
But as I watched,
and trusted this tie to hold me up,
The ends split one by one.
I had put too much stress on the knot.
I burnt the ends so that it would last this time.
I invested so much time and effort
Into tying that knot
And trying to make it last.
 
But I'm watching it Frey 
right where I hurt it.
And I'm slightly surprised.
And I know I'll fall soon
 
But I'll guess I'll just wait 
for the next tie to catch me after this.
It always happens this way.
Then I'll just wait 
for the next one to fray
When I tied it tighter than the one before.
 
But if it was up to me,
I would be done with tying ties
Because it's really just a hopeless mess.
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Rachel Chasteen

A small town Ohio girl who was thrown in South-western Florida after her sophomore year of high school.

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Grant-Grey Porter Hawk Guda
<div>Powerful expression. Always let poetry fill your life. Keep expressing your heart. &nbsp;</div><div>&nbsp;</div>

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