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Unawaken


she walks with steps of gloom everything is blurry when she enters a room her eyes burn with sadness as she fades off into blackness she asks herself to stay strong but she's getting tired and she knows it's wrong all these things she fears fall from her cheek kinda like tears she lays in her bed and tries to get through as it remains around like a tattoo everything seems so stale and her face is looking kinda pale simple thoughts surround her mind her eyes are drifting almost blind she closes her eyes and tries to catch some sleep but she doesn't awake her heart was too weak.
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Vidman97
<p>Wow. *blown away*</p>
savigirl14
<p>Powerful poem but truly amazing. I love how much emotion you put into this poem. Keep writing and I love your hair. Please read my poems and tell me what you think.</p>

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