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Everything i attempted to do, i asked God a question like why do i lose?
is life really a blessing ,what do i do?
Action speak louder then words.... either you contniue to move or lose sight.
..... Life is never one directed..... even my twenty twenty vistion viewd unperfected.
Parallel lenses
What is the purpose?
Eyes are two different placements. can be viwed as identical cause you know the purpose IS to be success......full.
Even during struggle.
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