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Uncomfortable

by 12278

Donald Trump please save us

Donald Trump help make laws

Save us, please once and for all

Because that's all we need 

So help us please

 

So much violence 

Make them quit 

So much bullying 

Make them split

 

Because there was a gun 

I had to go run

Because someone was shot 

I needed a hiding spot

Because someone was screaming 

I saw someone bleeding

Because the shooting was just a flaw 

Donald Trump needs to make new laws

 

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Comments (18)

12278
<p>YOU write a poem then.</p>
N2QM
<p>Donald Trump is a racist idiot who only cares about himself.</p>
upnorthdavid
800 reads, kudos, man
annabananawnutella
<p>I love this</p>
RealityInANutshell
<p>wussup</p>
RealityInANutshell
<p>XD wtf even is this trash</p>
good_morning_GRIZZLY
<p>Our President Vladimir Putin is doing all he can in order to make sure that these shootings stop. As well as making sure to line up his pockets with the money from the NRA. Just remember to dodge bullets better for now, because they don&#39;t give a fuck about you. They never will. Also vote Democrat in November if you want to see the traitors hanged.</p>
12278
<p>Adrian - I Like How you Rhyme it Good :D</p>
12278
<p>I like how you ryme on your poem.Jose Fernandez</p>
12278
<p>Love your rhyming. - Sonia Patlan</p>
12278
<p style="margin-left: 40px;">I like the part of donold trump-joshua</p>
12278
<p>i like how you put violence about someone that has a gun. Manuel</p><p>&nbsp;</p>
12278
<p>Good job I like the ryming in the poem and the part about Donald Trump lol -Evelin :)</p>
12278
<p>i like your poem you did graet.-lia</p>
12278
<p>Your poem was really good-demarice</p>
12278
<p>BEST POEM EVER</p>
12278
<p>jk</p>
12278
<p>HI</p>

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