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by Iguessimallie

Come on and feel that burn. Give it up, you've got to learn. Because lifes a big lesson . That your begining to fail. So, read all your books, And take all your notes. Let's try to get this right. [Baby its just us tonight] So, lets start all over , And learn what we can. 'Cause the worlds still spinning , And, my hearts still racing. Can we even remember what were lookin for? And, if we try a little harder. Stay up a little later. Maybe we can get this right. Because life's a big lesson. That ur begging to fail. So, read all your books . And, take all your notes. Let's try to get this right. [Tonight] Can we go back time? And, start this all over. Forget all the pain. And all the regret.
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Iguessimallie

Hello, I'm Allie. I'm a very honest person who has a witty sense of humor. I love to meet new people and listen to stories about their life experiences. I believe that life lessons can be acquired at any moment and that we should learn from everyday. I try my best to be a good person and do what I can to help out. I work at an animal shelter and love it. I also love to read, write, sleep, and eat mashed potatoes :)

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samueltfranklin
You've got a good rhyme scheme going on. As it is, it sounds a lot like song lyrics--which is cool, but consider providing more specificity and concreteness to turn it into a more vivid poem. For example, the narrator tells the person to whom he is speaking to "read all your books/ take all your notes"--is this person a student? A writer? It is a bit of a mystery, and shedding some light on this person may help the poem to be more tangible.

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