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Underwater Party


Underwater

The party begins

The two best friends

Having the time of their lives


The Fault, trying to form a crack between them

Will never stop until he succeeds

So he listens and he follows them

Until he discovers the secret


The secret of one best friend

That the other isn’t supposed to tell

The Fault, with the evil grin, laughed maliciously

And goes around telling the embarrassing secret
 

Then, the action begins

The friend with the secret, gives a fatal punch to other for telling the secret

The friend who really didn’t tell, gives her a brutal smack in the face in return

They go back and forth, while their friendship breaks along the Fault

 

The two ex-friends release so much energy as their friendship breaks

And the hatred becomes stronger and stronger

That the water above them rises 100 feet in the air

And it crashes straight into buildings, people, and land

Causing horrid screams, numerous deaths, and plenty of destruction

 

Underwater

The party ends

The two ex-best friends

Will never see each other again

 

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