Underwater Party
Underwater
The party begins
The two best friends
Having the time of their lives
The Fault, trying to form a crack between them
Will never stop until he succeeds
So he listens and he follows them
Until he discovers the secret
The secret of one best friend
That the other isn’t supposed to tell
The Fault, with the evil grin, laughed maliciously
And goes around telling the embarrassing secretThen, the action begins
The friend with the secret, gives a fatal punch to other for telling the secret
The friend who really didn’t tell, gives her a brutal smack in the face in return
They go back and forth, while their friendship breaks along the Fault
The two ex-friends release so much energy as their friendship breaks
And the hatred becomes stronger and stronger
That the water above them rises 100 feet in the air
And it crashes straight into buildings, people, and land
Causing horrid screams, numerous deaths, and plenty of destruction
Underwater
The party ends
The two ex-best friends
Will never see each other again
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