The Unheard

Fri, 05/03/2013 - 09:00 -- jb9609

Such an amazing place to be
United with my mother with glee
I feel your warm embrace inside
Safe and sound day and night
I cant wait to see you
and daddy too
I want nothing more
then to be loved by you two
I promise to make you two proud
As my years go by
I'll be leading the crowd
I can feel it happen in no time
So much i cant wait to experience
So much I want to do
With my loved ones around
I know I'll come true
Mommy when I see you I'll take in your milk
A perfect bond more beautiful then silk
Daddy I'll be the best I can be
I'll look up to you with all certainty
Just a little bit longer and I'll be there
Become so happy from your love and care
Wait...What's this?...
I'm leaving already?
It feels too soon, it doesn't feel right
I guess it's time to go to the light
I'm scared, mommy, daddy, this hurts
There's this guy with

Comments

trinitywebb

Is this the end?? Keep going please!! I liked it.

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