UNIMPEDED
I wanted to build my life with you despite all that had advanced our story, I decided to start again from the beginning and our story inspires me to write love stories,but just cries and pain wrote that sweet white sheets. I wanted to build a world in which we live different only that this world was love,inspire me to your beautiful lips,beautiful roses,and on your arden toes,I wanted you to be the only person who could touch my soul,no one would do it like you what did you do before,by that time I lived with you was very nice but it was not enough for my heart. I wanted you to look at my words as I loved you not a story like Romeo and Juliet because ours goes beyond this beautiful story.I wanted you to watch what you could come to love more than me someday,I wanted to give all the beautiful words that did me a beautiful new proverb. I wanted your love lay it up for someone else since that day,I wanted to lay it up(save it) because maybe some more intense love would love you more than me,because I wanted the best for you,I wanted a radical world for me to roam around and I find you to be happy in your new life without my love,So that there was no impediment one for me.
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Jonatanvega
Hello my name is Jonatan Vega as you all see I love poetry.My favorite languages are Spanish,French,English and some Italian,but my first language is Spanish.I live in US but I am from México.I am a college student at American River college in Sacramento,CA.I consider myself as very talented.I am very confident.I am kinda quiet,but when you get to know me I am amazing.I consider defining what the soul feels is art:poetry.I am a painful poet most of the time,but I could write about everything when I put that objective in my mind.I love love for what it is.i am a amazing person if you get to talk to me Some of My work focuses on what I see as the repression of women by men. This often takes the form of personal insults directed at men in general Love,Heartbreak.life changed my writing by helping me to lose my former models, and reach a more dramatic lyricism, my style now showed more realism than before.Recurring themes in my work include love,hearbreak,humanism, nature, alienation,loss, love, pain, growth, hope,death, family, sorrow, women’s issues, and violence.Although my portrayal of men is ironic and critical,I felt a strong need for love, and Im able to express the tension and passion these ambivalent feelings in poetry both simple and deeply sensual, expressing an original note in erotic poetry in a sensitive manner. . Facebook: @Jonatan Vegâ poeta instagram: @Jonatanvega_writesbooks Twitter:@Fearlessvega Any thing you want to know feel free to ask
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