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if i write words for as long as i can with no punctuation and no stopping is it art or just a very long sentence that in the end accomplishes nothing but makes the reader think that i am an incompetent poet and moreover that i dont understand the basic rules of writing in the english language or even possibly that i am another left set young person in love with the misogynistic works of jack keroauc and alan ginsberg who most famously wrote in this unbroken unintelligible style that i am using now before you in a possibly feeble attempt to salvage a piece that is at least somewhat original and somewhat interesting in comparison to the other lackluster stuff on this site that can be found in as much abundance as apathy can be found in a highschool that does not treat its students as people who need to be taught but rather as children who need to be watched just in case they get they idea that they might want to break something or even start a band and call it breakneck speed and write songs about sex drugs and alcohol even though every member of the band is a straight edge sober virgin who was raised by both of his parents who loved him very much in spite of the way their parents before them had set the example that it was okay to abuse both physically and emotionally the fruit of their loins in such a way that would leave them forever scarred and traumatized as broken adults who must learn to raise a family in a world that vilifies conservative ideals because they so often go contrary to the liberal agenda that decrees what is right and what is wrong in the same awful highschool that their son is in against his will constantly yelling at the top of his voice just trying to be seen by the people above him who say that college is a must do thing and that the work force is a disgusting place to be and that the only people who really matter are college profesors so we should teach our kids to be just like them so that someday we might be proud of them for rising up and learning everything there is to possibly learn and to never work a day in their miserable white haired lives that eventually turn to dust just like the rest of us meaningless specks clinging to this meaningless speck inside of this infinite void of other meaningless specks that just wont shut up with their edgy run on sentences.
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