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by Aridesa

June 25, 2013

Blank

Unknown

Undescribable

Empty

That is where my life lays

But not at all will it ever stay

For life has only just begun

And a story has yet to be rung

Without a letter

Wthout a space

Without knowlege

Without a trace

But yet to be discoverd

Yet to be uncovered

Yet to be realized

Yet to be undiguised

So this,

This is where my life lies,

Among the stars

Above the skies

Ever so true

Ever so vital

But never, ever satisfied

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CynthiaJun 25, 2013

<p>Aridesa, I think you succeeded at making this poem relate to the theme of second chances. At first, the tone of the poem felt sad. As I continued reading, I sensed that this poem is about starting over and having a "blank slate" or "untitled" beginning in life. It reminds me of the fact that life is like a chapter book with blank pages and at any moment, we can write a new chapter to life and move forward. I also like the way you structured the poem and lines. Keep Writing! :)</p>

AridesaJun 25, 2013

<p>I tried to keep this poem as real as possible.I wanted to write from the point when you have been given a second chance at something, and your life becomes blank, but not ever permantley will it stay there. What you do with it, is your choice and your decision. </p>