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everything is so heavy when I write.
Is it better to be simpler or lighter?
Lightness works best but, for me, it can't be helped.
Light doesn't exist while I'm here,
watching my slow pen try to stay put.
everyone is so heavy when I think,
nothing seems to carry any suns.
Will you ask about you?
Well, I'd say you're the heaviest.
You might say that you're only reading and listening.
Well, I fear your opinion more than anyone else's.
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