untitled no. 4

Fri, 02/23/2018 - 11:19 -- j.g.

sometimes i look

at you and think

how did i get so lucky

 

sometimes i look 

at you and wonder

how did this happen 

between us

 

would things be different if

you wouldn’t have said

anything

 

how would i have 

known otherwise

 

sometimes you know

exactly what i mean

to say and you know

without me saying 

a single word

 

i feel like when

i look into your eyes

sometimes its like a big

hug around me,

short and small

telling me “i understand

and i will do anything

i have to 

to help you through this”

 

i know when you’re hurting

i know when you’re happy

you look at me with a happy look

or a look that scares me

 

worries me

 

but it doesn’t matter

i will help you

all the while being able to look

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at your beautiful face

This poem is about: 
My community

Comments

Magick_Candie

I like the poem... but one thing -not really important- but when I go to read my peom, I end up here. Would you know what that is?

Magick_Candie

I serisouly remade the poem, and right when I published it, it took me right here... Why?

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