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The Vacuum


Why allow to be controlled by the master puppeteers? We are all letting our very souls get consumed & sucked up from people that could care less about us. Like a vacuum, it is their goal to grab every single little particle that they can get a hold of. We need to grow legs & arms & run away as fast as we can & never look back. We should be those particles that float up into the sky & become one with all humanity, earth, & life. Don't ever get stuck inside the vacuum, but if you ever do, there's always a way out.
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Vampire_Tails201
Oh, this poem is amazing! XD I love how you compare conformity and/or bullying to a vacuum! Very intriguing... Well, ta-ta! *zooms off* ~Vampire Tails

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