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the valley of ashes


Returning back to all that is familiar, in all the most eerie ways,

It is snowing, but it’s not cold,

It is cloudy, without a cloud in the sky,

Raining from the sky,

Drops shattering on the pavement, then blowing into the wind,

Up in smoke,

Our lives,

Our friends,

Our homes,

Like something out of a Fitzgerald novel, the valley of ashes stirs, and then is silent,

Up in smoke.

 

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antoniakostelec

18 years old from Northern California.

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