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Vanessa


My Dearest Vanessa, you've always been so sweet just like eating a cherry after every single treat, You make my day better whether you smile or twirl your hair or hug me when you realize I've always felt like I wasn't there or when people interrupted good news I had to say about my good grades. I know you've always been proud, and you've always been nice to me even when you don't get the same treatment from others even though you're always there for everyone. Now all I can do is know that you've always been there and that you'll be my forever best friend. When I pass the halls, you hug me or even call my name you even choose me for things, some of my other friends wouldn't even choose me to play beside them when playing a game. When I'm with you, I never feel overwhelmed and clueless; you've found the words I always forget to say. Sometimes I wish we met earlier to create old memories that I wish we had but we had enough time to spend together and it's hard to realize that sometimes. We've never gotten in a fight or gotten mad at each other and that's when you realize we really understand each other.
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Hello fellow readers I'm Katie I love writing poetry and writing stories about small things that terrify me and things that are most important to me I hope you love my poetry and are excited to see more that I have to offer! "Good people go through bad things even when they haven't done anything wrong because that's just how the world is"

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PersonalThemeAbstract

Deeply personal tribute to specific friend Vanessa; autobiographical

SparseMeasureDense

One main idea per stanza; meditative repetition of appreciation

DarkSentimentBright

Overwhelmingly positive; celebrates friendship warmth and gratitude

StillEnergyExplosive

Gentle, reflective tone; quiet emotional intensity throughout

MicroLengthEpic

Approximately 26 lines; within 16-30 range

PlainFigurativeOrnamented

One simile (cherry); mostly direct declaration otherwise

LyricVoiceDramatic

Pure lyric voice; internal reflection on friendship with Vanessa

Free Verseloveidentitysimilerepetition

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