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I accepted this challenge with alacrity
Your skin like alabaster
I can't resist when I'm in your presence
My aim of this poem is to simple with my simplicity as I
Give you this message
No one can replace you
And how i feel about you
Your smile so apotheosis...To me
I just want to devote this my all,my love,my mind,body and soul...
I allowed my judgement to be an apriority
but it's forever that I knew without you
I could not breath...
I never hurt you again for you seriously had me at hello...I'll never again be so mellow
For before you had spoken your beauty already captured my soul
Your an angel who's just apterous
You helped me to light up your like the argon to my light bulb...
Without you I wouldn't be special...
You complete me...fully
My environment made me like an armadillo tried to stay in my shell
But the aroma that attended with your presence took me from my shell...
You had it all
All that I want and all that I need...
I watched people through aspersions at your name and instead of them it's you that I choose to believe...
I was asinine in my approach...
But I need you and I will always want you
I'll stand by your side and cause your haters to become attenuate (that's weak)
I'll be audacious in my reproach as I flaunt for you my audacity...
Your overwhelmingly beauteous to me and you can never be replaced
My love another day without you would turn my life into a black void meaningless empty space...
So I'm here asking you if by your side I can retake my place...

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