Vietnam
Vietnam
Ya want some poetry
Ya want some memories
Let this haunt your nights
As it does mine
Morning still dark
Roto blades noise background
Dark outlines
Smell JP4 & JET A
Mount up!
Huey, Cobra
Jolly Green Giant, Chinook
Sikorsky and Bell all
Go
GO, GO, GO !!!
Dew wet grasses
Humid, stink, and rot
Punjab pits
Smell
Fuel Oil…yeah…napalm
No Cordite now
Nitro’s pungent smell
S**t burners
Smell
Sweaty body odor
Cigarettes and booze
Fish Sauce or “Nuoc Mam”
Human waste and rotting garbage
Chickens, pigs, and emaciated dogs
Monkeys on a chain
Children and geese are early warning
Spitting cobras no warnings
Rice paddies
Banded King Kraits (2 step)
Cobras and vipers
Ever present
Slither along
Hiding under rocks and logs
Centipedes and giant scorpions
Red ants and Wolf spiders
Had enough?
Flowers, vines and trees
Are next with
Heart break grass, wait a minute vines
Viet Cong, VC, Charlie
NVA, Kramer Rouge, Pathet Lao
They want to kill you
$50 for Military ID Card
$500 for a soldier
There were sounds too
Silence
Hanoi Hanna news n music
We got to get out of this place
These boots are made for walking
My girl
Paint it black
House of the rising sun
Purple haze
Green Green Grass of home
Bamboo groves were nice
Under growth was evil
Underground sanctuaries
Tunnel rats
And snipers
C Ration, MRE’s
Hot meal if your lucky
Smoke ‘em if ya got ‘em
Sit or lie with creepy crawlies
“Nam Sucks - Embrace the Suck”
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