The View
Day can’t compare to thee’s simple beauty,
Now seeing you puts my mind right at ease,
Thoughts go in without my authority,
You are a mystery from what I see,
I look forward to seeing you each night,
You have made me fall in love like no other,
Having a companion gives me delight,
With you I am better and much wiser,
You are like a diamond the way you glow,
I can even compare you to white gold,
A spontaneous thing can even show,
That being a shooting star that’s untold,
Leaving would give me eternal sadness,
But I know it won’t last with spaces madness.
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