Villanelle
Even the stars struggle to shine next to your eyes,
Let your age know no limit, know no fear;
Let the beauty of your mind escape mortal demise.
Young, you can see up and past the skies,
The imagination used is vivid and clear;
Even the stars struggle to shine next to your eyes.
But those of young have yet to see how time flies,
Let not those around you stop and sneer;
Let the beauty of your mind escape mortal demise.
Old, you can see and see through the lies,
The wisdom used is ancient and sheer;
Even the stars struggle to shine next to your eyes.
But those of old have already descended their highs,
Let not death stop and jeer;
Let the beauty of your mind escape mortal demise.
Tolerance of mundane thought should not be a prize,
Take your thoughts and know where to steer;
Even the stars struggle to shine next to your eyes,
Let the beauty of your mind escape mortal demise.
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