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A vision so sweet, coming


A vision so sweet, coming from the beautiful brown eyes of a young woman who only allows words of strength, power, and wisdom to roll off of her great tounge. The intellect of 1000 philosophers and the ambition of 10,000 army men, yet no funds to cover the expenses of the university she worked so hard to get in. Acceptance letter, sitting bold and proud on her dresser, smiled at everyday by those beautiful brown eyes and teeth as white as snow with a grin as wide as a bow. She wont let this deter her, no, she's too strong-willed of a person, she fights hard for what she wants. She applies, applies, applies, applies for scholarships in great spirits and high hopes. She's determined to receive financial assitance. She doesn't want to let the lack of funds block her from her goal to achieving greater things life. She cries in the midst of her happy peers, and smiles in their faces to hide the pain of possible rejection. She prays, everyday, everynight, seeking a financial blessing. She receives, finally.....she receives!!!!!!!! head to the sky, down on her knees, giving thanks to her blessing. She goes off to college. Does her best in everything she engages in. She came, she saw, she conquered
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jrfowler95
This somewhat explains my college struggle

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