visions of passion

July 6, 2012

i see you baby, all four of my eyes your smile is golden like the spirits of the sun your smell is so good like a healthy breakfast your presence is needed like a hungry child wanting food your words of ideas is wiser than an old man telling stories your lips is soft like the teddy bear Ted your touch is smoother like big daddy kane's lyrics our love is passionate like th3 V8 fruit blend drink

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Poetryislife10Nov 4, 2019

<p>Nice poem. Can you check out my love poem? Im new here and i would like feedback!</p><p>It is called heartbeat. You can find it on my page. Tell me in the comments what you thought!</p>

MVP-Most Valuable PoetAug 10, 2012

thanks 4 the support its from the heart with creativity check out my other poems

jwienerAug 10, 2012

This is such a sweet poem, and the use of so many similes makes it clear that you truly care deeply for who you wrote this poem about, because all the comparisons are so thoughtful.