Walking a Thin Line
If we look at our entire life
And we take in all the good and bad that has happened to us
You will realize that as we walked along our "path"
We were closer to other people than we had ever believed
Yet, the problem we had,
Was that as we walked
We only looked down.
We were so focused on our journey
So set upon the idea that we must focus on us first and formost
We never looked up as we walked
For if we had,
Just for a second
We would have come to the realization that we werent so alone
And all along we just had to reach out
And expand from this thin line we walk.
And maybe life would have been a little easier
But we were so worked up with walking on this thin line.
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