Walls

June 20, 2013

Breakdown all those walls. I won't judge you by your faults. When you feel like falling down, I'll have my arms reached out waiting on the ground. I promise I won't let you down If you promise you'll stay around. I hope everything goes okay the times That you’re away. I miss you while you’re gone, But I know you’ll be coming home. And when you finally do, It’ll again be me and you.

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S611526JessicaJun 27, 2013

Thank you so much for that! It was actually one of my first poems that rhymed so well throughout the whole thing. What I find funny is that it was written around two in the morning when I had trouble sleeping. I wrote this for the person I'm in a relationship with who's been gone since summer started and won't be back until school starts up again. How ironic! I've read it; very good points made. Again, thanks for taking the time to read it! (:

RebeccaYSPerezJun 27, 2013

This poem may be short but it was so sweet and adorable! I love your rhyming scheme and just how well you say everything so easily! Who are you writing this for? Family or loved one? (Hope I'm not imposing). It comes at a great time! We just posted our first love poem guide.Becca.