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Water


“Water”

Water two different types of atoms bond by a simple attraction,

One is our salvation,

But the other is irrelevant,

Yet when put together they form part of us,

How amusing,

Well that’s nature’s law,

When I see water I think of love,

Rather odd feeling I thought,

Yet love is two different soul bonded by the same law,

Isn’t it beautiful i thought,

Isn’t it beautiful how both things makes us whole,

One cannot live without water,

Yet one can also be lost without love,

Beautiful I thought,

Water, 

Love,

The units that made you and I,

The pieces in a puzzle that complete us,

How romantic,

It is like watching the sunset in spring,

Or so I thought,

But love is forsaken,

For it is pain it’s main law,

 

I wonder what makes us human then,

Is it the water that make the greatest part of us?

Or perhaps it is our heart full of love?

Quite an odd predicament,

I know,

Yet pain make us stronger and we should seek love,

Forsaken as it might be,

It still makes us whole,

So I welcome pain,

I shut the door to my freedom,

I know I’m a lake that never move,

But at least I’m not hollow and I mourn for the lost moon.

Quite romantic,

Water stuck in a prison by choice,

I will mourn the loss of those hollow souls,

Yet even in pain there is happiness,

Or maybe I’m a hopeless romantic who will one day drop his pen to death parade,

 

Water and love,

Pain and void,

I will suffer the pain,

I will take my blame,

As long as I avoid the void I will live my days.

 

by Jesus H.

 

 

 

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