The Way The World Forgot You
Sometimes I see you in my dreams
When I do, I hug you a little tighter
because I already know
When I open my eyes
You would be gone
Not because you weren't real
but because you passed on
quiet, not loud
like the kind of quiet
that still lingers in the room
though I wish that were true
I wish heaven had a phone
So maybe I could hear your voice
or maybe at least just a little noise.
I wish I could tell you what you've missed
but then again you probably wouldn't wanna know
what man mom kissed.
it's the way the world forgot you
that I don't understand,
It feels like just yesterday
you were right here holding my hand.
The photos fade faster then I thought
they hardly say your name anymore
like your a closed door.
I still talk to you
In the quiet corners of my mind
when the sun slips through my window,
or when I hear the word kind.
The world forgot you, but I remain
still carrying pieces of your name.
Everytime the glass shines through
I see myself but I see you too.
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Deeply personal grief over loss of specific deceased person; autobiographical throughout.
Multiple ideas woven through: dreams, death, memory, fading photos, continued connection.
Predominantly sorrowful and melancholic with longing; minor moments of tender connection.
Quiet, meditative pace with soft language; restrained intensity despite emotional weight.
Approximately 28 lines; falls in 16-30 range.
Strong use of metaphor (closed door, glass reflection), simile, personification; well-ornamented.
Pure lyric internal voice; direct address to deceased; introspective first-person throughout.
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