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Mon, 07/15/2013 - 12:33 -- AshMnky

I have a friend that I adore

Someone I've known for years

But everytime she sees me

She bursts out into tears

 

 

My friend has really good days 

When I can make her smile and cheer

But on those really sad days

"I'm fat" is all I hear

 

I've tried to lie to her but i cant

Its just not in me to lie

I've tried to force myself to break

But its just not in me to die

 

She thinks she ugly because of me

but she isnt ugly at all

She thinks she  fat because of me

and i will take that fault

 

I knew this  friendship would have a strain

Sometimes i wish i could bail

I knew I could cause her lots of pain

Thats what happens when youre a scale

Comments

marquist

Dude, that was absolutely amazing. I loved it all in all. Huge twist at the end. I was not expecting it. Keep it up!

AshMnky

Really appreciate it! Thanks! 

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