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What an Awesome Thing


Peace.

It is what I feel

At once when I see

That which they call snow.

Once on the mountaintop

While snowboarding one day

It was windy

It was cloudy

It was cold

I had never done this before

Thus, I had never been on a mountain

This height

I looked around me

Stopped

Breathed.

And the spirit came over me

The Spirit of the Lord

And I felt

Chills

And then I went down.

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