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What do you see


When I look at you I see fire

Fire in you heart and black in

your soul. I look at you and I see Emptness

Gray sky with dark clouds around your world.

When I see you I see nothing but failiar I see

Mistakes and falls. But I dont see you.

Look in the mirror, What do you see? I see a victim

Of hurt and pain.

Now, I see a Young soul, Bright filled with life

College going Head held high with Dreams of making it

in the world. I see the light in your eye I see the upbeat to your heart

The dark clouds are bright bule and the yellow sun I see a strong person

Better than a friend and better than you could ever see.

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