What Eats the Soul

February 21, 2020

What eats the soul,

Goes unnoticed,

Without a fight.

What attacks the soul,

Is noticed immediately,

For the damage it causes is too great to not be noticed.

What timids the soul,

Goes unnoticed by you,

But is noticed by your surroundings.

What uproars the soul,

Is what goes against beliefs,

You fight your point till you can't any longer.

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sf21Jan 19, 2022

<p>I feel like this really relates to how I see the world and me with it, just like how you wrote it. </p>