What I See

March 30, 2014

I look and I see a puzzle

A book

A poem

A movie

Pieces in the wrong spot

Horrible use of grammar and syntax

With words that don't fit the topic

And a butchered editing job

I smile and I laugh

I stare and I flex

Struggling to be comfortable in my own skin

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