what I would change

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21122
United States
39° 7' 44.904" N, 76° 28' 45.9984" W

What would I change?
That's a simple question
I would change the world we live in
All the wrong we've been taught
Our need to attack and criticize the things we don't necessarily understand
Our obsession with being someone we aren't
Our all encompassing obsessions with our possessions
Our lack of trust in our families
The things I would change would make the world a much better place

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