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What is love without us?


"Lover's Rock" is what we'll listen to over and over again until we start to sit closer and closer as we act like we don't notice each other. You'll spin me up in the air, but I can't even lift you up no matter how much I try but I know it's alright because every girl with their crush has at least done that once. I'll laugh at your stupid jokes and that one voice that you make, and I even laugh at your stupid and sweet mistakes. No matter where we are you'll always make me laugh. We'll take pictures of the sunset and say we'll wish on a shooting star that when we're older, we'll see one together. I'll brush your long hair, and you'll brush mine and that's what we'll remember all the time the sweet hand brushing hair out of my face and the sweet words said as my hair got brushed. One day we'll meet once again since you're the one that got away that's what everyone who has lost their true love always says but now I'm staring at the sunset, and I know that from a few miles away you are too.
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Hello fellow readers I'm Katie I love writing poetry and writing stories about small things that terrify me and things that are most important to me I hope you love my poetry and are excited to see more that I have to offer! "Good people go through bad things even when they haven't done anything wrong because that's just how the world is"

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PersonalThemeAbstract

Deeply personal, autobiographical account of a specific romantic relationship and loss.

SparseMeasureDense

Moderate idea density; reflective pacing with recurring images of intimacy and longing.

DarkSentimentBright

Bittersweet tone; nostalgic warmth mixed with melancholy acceptance of separation.

StillEnergyExplosive

Gentle, contemplative voice; occasional momentum but primarily meditative and yearning.

MicroLengthEpic

Approximately 26 lines; falls in mid-length range of 16-30 lines.

PlainFigurativeOrnamented

Moderate ornamentation; metaphors of connection, sunset imagery, personification of memories.

LyricVoiceDramatic

Pure lyric internal voice; introspective first-person reflecting on intimate experience.

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