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What makes me tick


How can somebody be so immature

Not a good nerve in their body

You give up your life for them for nothing 

In return, you get a simple "okay"

I repeat the words" say something, or i;m giving up on you"

but you make me change into a whole direction.

You could be so mean and insenstive

but i guess that's what i love about you

 

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