What others see

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15521 Wiemer Ave
United States
33° 53' 32.19" N, 118° 9' 15.1488" W

What others see

Is a girl who can't dress,

A girl who studies 24/7,

who doesn't put make-up on,

who keeps to herself becuase she is afraid.

 

Out in the world I'm a girl

Who doesn't put a mask on,

Who tries to be someone she's not,

A mirror of other girls,

But is all that true?

 

What I see

Is a girl who has her own style,

A girl who does what she wants when she wants,

Who has natural beauty,

Who is herself becasue she is unique all on her own.

 

In the mirror I'm a girl

Who is you own person,

Who does her own thing just beacuse,

A mirror of no one but herself

And that's the truth.

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Grant-Grey Porter Hawk Guda

Powerful expression! 

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