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What people see through the tinted window


It was a dark gloomy day when I was at my lowest time people looked through the tinted window and they see me and my responsibilities they also see the most basic things of me they see things I like that they can't even name or they don't even see me who I am they just look the atmosphere like the trees and the rain; they see my favorite songs or even my favorite foods but through the mirror people say way more of me and I see what I know about myself they see the help I seek but they don't even know anything about me. In the tinted window people see I like love rock songs and some nice lyrical songs, I really like romance books and am very interested in dance, but they don't know how hard I've tried for people to see me like how I look at myself through the mirror. In the morning when I see myself through the mirror I can see how much I relate to some songs and the reasons why I do; I also see my admiration for the people I love and the people in my family I can see how much fate I have to believe the truth in the best manner and how much I try to get better.
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Katiecreates

Hello fellow readers I'm Katie I love writing poetry and writing stories about small things that terrify me and things that are most important to me I hope you love my poetry and are excited to see more that I have to offer! "Good people go through bad things even when they haven't done anything wrong because that's just how the world is"

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PersonalThemeAbstract

Deeply personal exploration of identity and self-perception versus external judgment.

SparseMeasureDense

Long, flowing sentences with few distinct ideas; meditative repetition of mirror/window concept.

DarkSentimentBright

Mixed tone: melancholic beginning shifts toward hopeful self-awareness and personal growth.

StillEnergyExplosive

Quiet, introspective voice; minimal kinetic intensity despite thematic conflict.

MicroLengthEpic

Four stanzas spanning approximately 16-20 lines; mid-length poem.

PlainFigurativeOrnamented

Central metaphor of tinted window and mirror; minimal additional ornamentation.

LyricVoiceDramatic

Pure lyric internal voice; introspective meditation on self versus external perception.

Free Verseidentityspiritualmetaphorrepetition

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This is an amazing poem, I love it sooooo much! Would you mind if I made like a parade inspired my it? It would be kind of the same but different ideas and representations.

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