What was that?

October 27, 2020

What was that That was roof over blazing hot sun Without that life is no fun With that life was groomed Without that the world seem doomed That is gone so far away I hope that could take me away What was that? That was my dad Your brave princess is here You left me thats not fair I love you And will go throught the path given by you

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MuqadasJun 17, 2021

I'm looking forward to you❤

MuqadasMay 15, 2021

<p>thankyou so much</p><p> </p>

DOYIN TRACEYOct 27, 2020

I can tell that it is a great poem....but somehow I got lost in trying to connect with you through your words...that I fail to find exactly what you mean....i think I would get it better and understand it better if I could just find a constant line of thoughts and feelings you are trying to portray. But I think it's a great piece and at the same time...i can't help but feel like you cut yourself short at some point..and that you still have more to say on the subject...either on this same Poem...or others you will write in future...and I can't wait to read them all...❤