What would happen?
What would happen
If I die?
Would anyone mourn?
Would anyone care?
Would anyone notice?
They would notice.
A class of 28
Now a class of 27
They would care.
4 groups of 7
Now 1 group of 6
They would mourn.
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They would be obliged to write a long caption
I was never good at writing long captions
5 paragraphs is just nice
You care but you know your viewers don’t have the attention span
I could never squeeze out more than 4
Yours
Yours are always so eloquent
Like treading on eggshells
Even though you’ve broken so many eggs
And made so many omelettes
With me
But then
You write a longer caption
8 paragraphs
And a line!
And I feel my omelettes turn cold
They can’t compare
To his three-layered cake
And then I ask myself
What would happen
If I die?
Would you mourn?
Would you care?
Would you notice?
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