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What Would I Change


Why must we be fat?

Why must the food be bad.

Eat a burger feels like you got hit by a bat.

Then there are these diets that are fad.

As America we are not healthy

We are not strong

What could be wrong

The way we eat is the answer

I would change the habbits to good

Eat better

Eat smarter

Eat wiser

Lower the chances of death by food

Even through they put us in a good mood

We will live longer

We will live stronger

Put down the grease

Put down the preservatives

Eat an apple

Eat baked

Eat grilled

Eat better

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