What Would I Change? Well...

Mon, 03/03/2014 - 22:46 -- tman49

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I had a dream that someday I’d win
Writing and writing
again and again                              
I had a dream that this was the one
Could it be I’ve finally won
Only to lose
oh yes
again


Scholarships smolarships
scholar shits again
Writing and writing
Again and again
Don’t give up
Reach for the stars
Don't give up
Cause this one’s ours


I had a dream that came from within
Could it be true that even I can win
Waiting Waiting Waiting my friend
Trying and trying
again and  again
What’s that you say
What would I change
My God
I’d win

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Royal Blood

Your edits are awesome X)

 

tman49

Thank you !

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