What writing is for

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30909
United States
33° 27' 53.0388" N, 82° 4' 24.2364" W

Opening the many chambers of my mind
Seeking places I cant seek with friends in mind
Diving deep to seek who I really am
To study myself and find a plan
Releasing the ressure is something too sweet
To write emotional progress daily on a new sheet
Opening doors discovering feelings
The day I traveled held so much in side with its dealings
Gasping for iar always breathing heavy
My chest is released when I wirte things treading
Treading into new uncharted territory
Mapping a way for myself to tell my story
Unlocking past incidents
Smiling on moments good or bad when I reminisce
Good to dwell on my journey
To become a wiser man in the world never hurting
Society as a whole especially those close
Always trying to be a shining example to my bros
Its tough to put pen to paper every moment
Not every second shines like the ones that show it
It being your heart finally pumping
The moment you realize you're breathing in something
Your soul starts to bive out to you existence
You realize someone worth fighting for is close by sitting
Noticing for the 1st time in your life that you're living
That this is a real moment in life that you're living
Expressing your inner most secrets
Best friends never know what the pen writes in neatness
The power the pen houses is a cooling oasis
Not a paradise some moments written are dangerous
What I feel is for me alone
Unless unleashed to smoeone I want to hold
This is more than writing
Predictions come true when pursuing things insighting
More than the sound of pen scratching paper
Its the depth of my reality coming to light as a maker
Of all things creating who I am
Swirling in my hand to create a world for a man
A young man who has long life ahead
Not trying to lose years to thoughs in my head
So the paper is my release
To get back to action and running in the streets
I came to understand the purpose that was holding me
I saw it all when writing in my poetry

Comments

Maurice1880

Well guys, this is my first poem on this site. Look at it however you want to and give me pointers to improve my writing skills. Thanks

Maurice1880

"ressure" was meant to be "pressure"

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