When
When I first looked into your eyes I just wanted to cry for joy. When I first stared into your eyes I felt like time stopped and it was just the two of us. I stopped noticing your eyes and noticed your smile. The way it always brighten my day. How every word was smooth and so sweet. When you spoke you never lied to me. I stopped noticing your beautiful eyes and your sweet lips to look upon your heart. How it was promised to me and me only. Te way it was pure and everlasting. As time went by I couldn’t believe my eyes. Your eyes red from range causing tears of pain. Your smile became weak and angry. Now the saddest moment in my life. Words so sweet became sour filled with hate. The joyous tears that ran down my check are now bitter to the taste. Your heart once promise to me is now shared by every girl I know. Once pure is now cold and un wanted. What happened to us what happened to you? My love is now my hate and forever my abuser.
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