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When A Friend Leaves


How forget about you friend if in every part of me you are, even when the world feels on me here you appear holding me not to slip since you left my world was erased on white as a blank without love or color. I felt so much your departure that I felt faint and break me in thousand pieces, but I remembered how you used to hold my hand when I left fear in life and you said don't cry because even if I am not here and while I am in the worst darkness I will continue to protect you as the first and last time and together we will play and sing that song that we desire with joy and love. I told you forgive me if one time I offended you and you smiled. You said theres nothing to forgive brother only through our love and understanding is sufficient ,I will be with you in the radiance of the sun, in the dark of night and maybe in the sky glowing with jesus and if my soul was strong before you improved the way I felt and I became strong, and with more faith and I told God that I would be able to change my life and my soul for you. He said now I see that in the world there is still love and he made us a new life and we shine together How forget about you friend if in every part of me you are, even when the world feels on me here you appear holding me not to slip since you left my world was erased on white as a blank without love or color. I felt so much your departure that I felt faint and break me in thousand pieces,but I remembered how you used to hold my hand when I left fear in life and you said don't cry because even if I am not here and while I am in the worst darkness I will continue to protect you as the first and last time and together we will play and sing that song that we desire with joy and love. I told you forgive me if one time I offended you and you smiled. You said theres nothing to forgive brother only through our love and understanding is sufficient,I will be with you in the radiance of the sun,in the dark of night and maybe in the sky glowing with jesus and if my soul was strong before you improved the way I felt and I became strong,and with more faith and I told God that I would be able to change my life and my soul for you. He said now I see that in the world there is still love and he made us a new life and we shine together in one beautiful place where friendship and love never went in eternity.And I knew that time lived with you was not enough because I thought I could still do much better for you no matter if a being does not understand our friendship, our father lord Jesus will fill us of light and wisdom the heart ,and the soul more every day more, and we will be so happy together.r in one beautiful place where friendship and love never went in eternity.And I knew that time lived with you was not enough because I thought I could still do much better for you no matter if a being does not understand our friendship, our father lord Jesus will fill us of light and wisdom the heart ,and the soul more every day more, and we will be so happy together.
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Jonatanvega

Hello my name is Jonatan Vega as you all see I love poetry.My favorite languages are Spanish,French,English and some Italian,but my first language is Spanish.I live in US but I am from México.I am a college student at American River college in Sacramento,CA.I consider myself as very talented.I am very confident.I am kinda quiet,but when you get to know me I am amazing.I consider defining what the soul feels is art:poetry.I am a painful poet most of the time,but I could write about everything when I put that objective in my mind.I love love for what it is.i am a amazing person if you get to talk to me Some of My work focuses on what I see as the repression of women by men. This often takes the form of personal insults directed at men in general Love,Heartbreak.life changed my writing by helping me to lose my former models, and reach a more dramatic lyricism, my style now showed more realism than before.Recurring themes in my work include love,hearbreak,humanism, nature, alienation,loss, love, pain, growth, hope,death, family, sorrow, women’s issues, and violence.Although my portrayal of men is ironic and critical,I felt a strong need for love, and Im able to express the tension and passion these ambivalent feelings in poetry both simple and deeply sensual, expressing an original note in erotic poetry in a sensitive manner. . Facebook: @Jonatan Vegâ poeta instagram: @Jonatanvega_writesbooks Twitter:@Fearlessvega Any thing you want to know feel free to ask

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