When I Look At You

I get this feeling of comfort
from the warmth in your arms
to your kisses
so sweet

Your love is contagious
chills run up and down my spine
then straight down to my stumbling feet

I can't help but feel so anxious
when I'm away
I don't know how I can make it
through the day

and when I look at you
you have this face
that says
you're tried
and you can't take it
feeling that this might not be real
you just don't know how to feel

but baby
these butterflies
these stars in my eyes
when I look at you
it's not a trap
you don't need to feel like that

just know
I've heard before
that when you fall in love
it feels like home

and every time I cry
you're the only one
who holds me close

life's so much easier with you
i'm more well spoken
not so broken

feeling awoken
by your spirit
the soul behind the body
that belongs to your being

in this realm we call reality
I search within the depths of my mind
only to find
the love I have for you just grows
more and more
each day

I have this picture in mind
of what we can create
you are the best believe
without you i'm incomplete
that's right
I said it
You got the best of me

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S.zaynab.k

A passionate sentimental love poem in thankful adoration. Thumbs up.

 

. pls do review my latest poem too, I'm quite new here but have been writing elsewhere for ages and readers say they get messages for life from my poems. So pls add your thoughts under it.

imjjaazzinn

Wow thank you so much! I truly appreciate the feedback (: I will definitely take some time to read your poetry!

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